Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes other people believe that it is
important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
Childhood is the most important phase of anybody’s life that parents should be aware of its potential impacts on their children’s life. While there are some arguments about the decisions that children are allowed to make at an early age and its negative effect on their personality, others opine that it is a crucial skill that they should gain from childhood. I believe that offsprings should have the liberty to make their own choices.
On the one hand, parents who let their children make every decision on their own might face difficulties in raising their upbrings in the future. In other words, if a child used to give his opinion in every detail and make his personal choices without parents, he may not consider the elder’s feelings and respect their opinions in the future. For example, when a child wants to watch cartoons and his parents always say yes, he will not be able to understand the needs of other family members. Therefore, such an action will make a selfish and arrogant citizen in society.
One the other hand, making-decision skills are vital for success in our world, and even though allowing children to pick up what they wear and eat is a small choice, it will develop a keen sense of responsibility in their personality. To illustrate, this behavior helps children to be self-dependent and make more important decisions in the future. Needless to say, that will raise their awareness about the positive and negative impacts of their choices, and they will gain experience and be responsible for their actions. Thus, parents should encourage their offsprings to make their own decisions.
Having presented the arguments above, I have drowned the conclusion that parents should be aware of the impact of allowing children to have the freedom to make choices. I want to reiterate my stance that decision- making skill is vital for children’s life and career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the liberty to make their own choices. On the one hand, parents who let their c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99684542587 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68919257579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3029409607 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267528144466 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111997189548 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685838606652 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170647534281 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06117157994 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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