In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
In numerous western countries, the idea of being independent and self-sufficient is highly valued. Owing to such beliefs, after completing schooling, youngsters move out of their parents’ house to live an independent life. People have varying opinions about this trend; however, this essay will argue that it is a positive advancement as it brings numerous benefits for young adults as well as their parents.
From the youngsters’ perspective, to begin with, living away from their families transform them into responsible people. Whether they live alone or share an apartment with friends, now, they have to carry out most of the household work such as cleaning and cleaning. In this process, they become accountable and start to learn valuable life skills which might otherwise they have ignored since parents do all this for their offspring. For instance, I have been living in Canada alone for almost a year, this separation has taught me significant values such as managing expenses more consciously, learning how to use and even improved my confidence level. Thus, by living away from one’s family they become accountable for their actions and choices.
In addition, this trend has brought benefits for parents as well. As young adults shift from their parents’ house. The parents can now have more time for themselves which was once occupied my child-rearing responsibilities. They can have multiple options to either spend more time together or pursue those hobbies which remained unfulfilled because of increased responsibilities. Moreover, these moms and dads become financially sounder as they are no longer supporting their sons and daughters. For example, there is an upsurge in the number of elderly tourists going on world tours because of the fact that these couples are no longer stressed for providing financial support to their children, thus, pursuing their desire that might have gone unfulfilled if this switch was not happening. Therefore, this trend is also beneficial for parents.
To conclude, living away from family transform youngsters into responsible adults as well as parents can dedicate more time to themselves. Due to such significant advantages, this switch is, indeed, a positive development for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a positive development for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4164305949 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8676616005 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57790368272 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8930996944 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273377271418 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949089279228 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483023380809 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163446934189 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498293782009 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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