in some countries owing a home rather than renting on is very important for people why is this calls do you think this is positive or negative situation .
people in some countries now consider owing a home to be more important rather than renting one.this essay discuss the underlining reason for this preference and elaborate on why it is negative development.
There are two main reasons for people preference for home ownership first,for some people,owing a house or an apartment means that they do not have to waste time on accommodation hunting when a rental contract expiry. therefore, they can just focus on their career goals or other important things such as marriage second nowadays many people buy a home with a mortgage so they know the exact amount of money they pay and also the regular amount they have to pay this allow people to make assignment long term financial plan for the future where this is not the case when they rent a home because they are subject to change in rental price made by landlord this trend may not many people value i'm on my ship over rental accommodation is negative due to the following reasons most house or apartment have a low liqiuidity which means they can't be easily exchanged or for cash as a result people who are still reading they are a mortgage may not be able to spend money on other big investment.
In addition ,while our tenant can easily terminate a rental contract and find a new place if they are not satisfied with their current accommodation ,it is very difficult for home owners to do the same.In the other world one person make an unwise decision and person a buy a house that the later regret,they are usually left with only two options ;either make the home available for rent or accept living in a place they don't happy with.
In conclusion, people in some countries now prefer to buy their home to because they value stability that owing a home provides and want to have clear future plans.However unless through considerations has made home owner may have to face and desirable outcomes from such a decision .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70414201183 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55519214209 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.201893931 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.0 106.682146367 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275797330815 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184681488715 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115687056626 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202526179484 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125336889489 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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