It is impossible to help all people in the world. so government should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Some people consider that helping all needy people all around the world would be an impossible ideal, án therefore government should only be concerned about those who live in their own countries. I completely disagree with this view.
There are some reason why helping all impoverished people in the world become difficult. Perhaps, I suppose that this is distance form country to other country very far. For example, government want to support something such as rice, food to other country will be ardous because those's shelf life is shortly. It is not only time problem but also cost transfer quite heavy, So this is not effectively and affect to budget of goverment. Secondly, today Viet Nam is quiet poor, assistance of Viet Nam spend to others still limited.
However, I think that we still should support all the needy people in the world by different resolution. By growing facility,We can choose airplane, that is the best way to delivery despite highly cost. Another reason is that I consider that we share a moral responsibility to help all those who lack the basic necessities of life. We can not place responsibility only on charities and international relief organisation like UNICEF and this is obligation of our for human, especially sufferings of no individual should be ignored anywhere in the world. Thus, government should have a budget, which spend to help all people or organisation in the world when they is difficultly.
In conclusion, although of course government must tackle urgent problem at home, but this is no mean that supporting for some country is impossible. We should regard as necessary
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Nam) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...m is quiet poor, assistance of Viet Nam spend to others still limited. However, I th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at we still should support all the needy people in the world by different resolut...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , We
...ifferent resolution. By growing facility,We can choose airplane, that is the best w...
^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...sibility to help all those who lack the basic necessities of life. We can not place responsibili...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o lack the basic necessities of life. We can not place responsibility only on cha...
^^
Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... or organisation in the world when they is difficultly. In conclusion, although ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79591965296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7845087259 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330748144037 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10442919699 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098622780006 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199855569257 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101847425804 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 499, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Nam) must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...m is quiet poor, assistance of Viet Nam spend to others still limited. However, I th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at we still should support all the needy people in the world by different resolut...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , We
...ifferent resolution. By growing facility,We can choose airplane, that is the best w...
^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...sibility to help all those who lack the basic necessities of life. We can not place responsibili...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o lack the basic necessities of life. We can not place responsibility only on cha...
^^
Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... or organisation in the world when they is difficultly. In conclusion, although ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05576208178 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79591965296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7845087259 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330748144037 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10442919699 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098622780006 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199855569257 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101847425804 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.