Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to the advancement of the health-care system and life quality, people’s longevity has significantly been improved. Many people believe that it is necessary to lengthen people’s working time. However, in my perspective, although working at old ages may benefit citizens to some extent, individuals should be forced to retire at a particular time.
It is obvious that employing aged staff may have negative impacts on not only workers but also companies’ profits. First and foremost, doing a job when employees are not vigorous enough increases the chances of accidents. When workers get older, they may find it difficult to perform the tasks exactly and effectively due to their poor health condition and reduction of mental strength, which gives rise to the number of mistakes at work. The older the become, the more risks they have to face.
Moreover, due to the upgradation of facilities and working styles, it is possible that the elderly who are not highly qualified cannot meet the demand of their expertise. As a result, the enterprise’s productivity will seriously be affected.
Another important reason that the government as well as laborers need to put into severe consideration is the spiritual life quality. This means that after a whole life devoting to the development of their company, employees deserve a happy and relaxing life. Instead of spending the whole day dealing with troubles and trying to meet the deadlines, individuals now are allowed to enjoy their precious time with beloved grandchildren as well as pursuing their hobbies such as gardening or reading. Only by doing this can they find the value of life.
In conclusion, with the above reasons, I strongly believe that it is unfair to obligate senior staff to sacrifice to work during the rest of their lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19387755102 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84597956841 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7247805097 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175832292674 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563149864805 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731611115799 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892718202988 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104245650831 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.