Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is easier for people to maintain good health than before.
Various people desire to be healthy for future life. While some people consider that it is easier for people to maintain good health than before, some deny this suggestion. It is so controvertible for them to determine a specific conclusion. In my view, modern people keep more heath body compared with in the past. They obtain plenty of facilities to become healthy, acquire advanced technologies for their health, and see advertisements from social media.
First, people more continue to be healthy than past people with bountiful services for their fitness. Nowadays, there are many gyms for people who want to be healthy people by physical. Moreover, these accommodations provide them classes such as aerobics, swimming, and training, and so on. They can also hire a personal trainer who teaches them how to become healthy with sophisticated equipment face to face. As a result, it is simpler for people to be healthy compared with in the past.
Secondly, people have more opportunities to experience the technologies for their health than in the past. Present people adore searching their bodies in hospitals because doctors can ease their pains with progressive tools. However, it was faint late for people to conduct their symptoms by researches from doctors because technologies were not sufficient for each disease in the past. Therefore, they continue to be healthy even if they noticed the weakness of their bodies.
Finally, several chances to watch ads cause people more healthy than previous people. People often see commercials in television programs and watch ample advertisements for their health. For example, there is an announcement about taking care of teeth for their future life when they watch television programs. Furthermore, people are capable of watching healthy drinks and supplements to urge them to be serious about their health. On the other hand, it was not enough for people to watch these advertisements with devices such as computers, televisions, and smartphones, and so on. Consequently, modern people easily keep a healthy body compared with in the past.
To sum up, it is easier for people to retain more health than in the past. I surely believe that current people establish healthy facilities, conduct diseases with progressed technologies, and obtain chances to watch advertisements about health.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3252688172 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895892286 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4868553168 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0454545455 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275552574311 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106890721282 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731398116941 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197240203785 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050933627848 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3252688172 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895892286 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4868553168 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0454545455 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275552574311 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106890721282 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731398116941 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197240203785 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050933627848 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.