1. Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that challenging hobbies alone can make people feel satisfactory and attract people to continue doing them. Although, people’s pastimes can bring excitement, a sense of fulfilment, as well as relaxation and escape. In my opinion, I disagree with the view that interesting hobbies have to be difficult because attraction depends on people’s different needs.
To begin with, some people think activities that challenge them make them excited, such as/like riding a rollercoaster. They can gain a sense of fulfilment when they master a difficult hobby because it is as similar to learning a new skill. A case would be people enjoy going scuba diving even though it might be fatal underwater if they are not careful enough. When an activity is already set-up for everyone to do without requiring hard-working or professional training, those who want to have unique experiences could end up feeling bored. Easy hobbies are not attractive for people to keep and people may give up after a very short period.
Conversely, some activities can be pleasurable for various reasons and do not have to be difficult at all. Firstly, more and more people are fostering hobbies for a relaxing purpose which they can refresh themselves with and escape from an increasingly stressful life. Also, some people have hobbies to maintain their health, and they would be happy if they could keep fit by undertaking their hobbies. For instance, Yoga is a very popular hobby for people of all ages due to the mental and physical pleasure it produces rather than its difficulty.
In conclusion, people gain happiness from different things, so to hobbies. All the activities can be enjoyable no matter if they are extremely challenging or don’t need to use your brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... depends on people’s different needs. To begin with, some people think activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10689655172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8149866468 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6535990235 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305045604352 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11264886971 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741751133481 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197745896735 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320221908939 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.