Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How people can achieve happiness?
Some individuals accept that money could not be cheerful. The exuberance in terms of quantity is hard to define because it is immeasurable and secondly we can attain delightfulness by working on minor things.
The feeling of happiness is uncountable which creates problems for the common people to understand. According to my believe, comparing the amount of money with the inner happiness can be unjustifiable to ourselves, the reason behind is that they both are intangible as well as varies with the person to person. These differences may be seen in the nature of a person, style of thinking or sometimes with the personality. There are a number of people who do not earn thousands of money but we have seen them happier in their life. For instance, Abdul Sattar Edhi, who was one of the famous philanthropists in Pakistan, helped a large amounts of needy people till his last breath. In fact, sometimes he did not have a penny to buy anything for his familyhood. That is why most people do not relate money with internal happiness.
On the other hand, we can make ourselves happy by focusing on small items, what I mean by this is that, by designing a habit of smaller tasks and completing it within a stipulated time, this will create inner satisfaction which will lead to the inner excitement of life. These chunk of tasks can be either errands or can be personal plans for the achievement of future goals. Although, it is an ongoing journey of our lives which are based on a continuity basis. While many groups of people assume that this is the best way to get happiness from oneself. Therefore, I presume that doing small pieces of task will reach to the path of happiness.
In conclusion, it is arduous for us to quantify happiness with money since incalculable in figures. However, our happiness can be achievable by creating a habit of tiny task on a routine basis
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...n people to understand. According to my believe, comparing the amount of money with the...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...behind is that they both are intangible as well as varies with the person to person. These...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 633, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amount'?
Suggestion: amount
...anthropists in Pakistan, helped a large amounts of needy people till his last breath. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ns for the achievement of future goals. Although, it is an ongoing journey of our lives ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... which are based on a continuity basis. While many groups of people assume that this ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77788576365 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4004623107 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334859010257 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102287506326 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752818640318 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193336920509 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065139366529 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...n people to understand. According to my believe, comparing the amount of money with the...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...behind is that they both are intangible as well as varies with the person to person. These...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 633, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'amount'?
Suggestion: amount
...anthropists in Pakistan, helped a large amounts of needy people till his last breath. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ns for the achievement of future goals. Although, it is an ongoing journey of our lives ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... which are based on a continuity basis. While many groups of people assume that this ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77788576365 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4004623107 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334859010257 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102287506326 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752818640318 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193336920509 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065139366529 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.