The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?
Nowadays jobs are much more demanding as compared to the past. This requires more effort and the time that sacrifice personal life. As a result, people everywhere in the private or the public sectors face this issue. This essay will discuss the problems that arise due to less time for the personal life.
To begin with, relations with family and friends are adversely affected due to the limited time available for personal life. People engaged so much in their jobs lack the energy and time to give to their loved times, which creates hurdles in their relationship. For example, one of my friend, who used to work extra hours, got divorced as his wife was always complaining that he cannot take care of her. Therefore, the shortage of time affects the relationships seriously.
Secondly, the health of a person deteriorates if he is too involved in his work. Everyone needs to be physically and mentally fit to remain healthy, which is not possible if he is not able to take time out for himself. For instance, for mental health it is pertinent to have no stress and peace in life, similarly for physical health he needs to exercise regularly, which is not possible with the limited time. Hence, health is affected because of these tough routines.
In conclusion, the shortage of time affects the human relationship as well as their health. In my opinion, it is essential to take out time for yourself to live a good life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78225806452 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55459380954 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5322990155 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351671379469 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129893464579 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999733445901 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229559503779 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822195658429 0.0609392437508 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78225806452 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55459380954 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5322990155 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351671379469 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129893464579 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999733445901 0.071462118173 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229559503779 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822195658429 0.0609392437508 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.