Many governments think that economic progress is their most important view, some people, however, think that other type of progress are usually important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Majority of the governments are of the opinion that economic growth is absolutely pivotal, while other people believe that other types of growth are always essential for a nation. This essay agrees that economic growth is absolutely pivotal in any nation.
To begin, the progress of a particular economy reduces inflation. This is because the amount of goods produced corresponds approximately with the population rate thus, enabling citizens to purchase goods such as petroleum products at affordable rates. Additionally, an improved economy increases employment opportunity to individuals. This is an absolute fact because manpower is crucial to meet up with sustainable services. For example, in the United State of America, immigrants nurses and doctors are employed to fill in health sectors , interestingly, this create employment opportunities for those in under developed countries thereby, improving the economy of the above mentioned state.
On the other hand, other types of progress create positive imparts in the nation. It is interesting to note that, a country does not only depend on its gross domestic products, however, it is also contingent on activities such as sports and tourism. A case in point is a tourist enter known as obudu cattle ranch located in West Africa which attracts lots of tourist to it beautiful scenary. Thus, indicating that, tourism is a major source of revenue in some regions.
In conclusion, although, some individuals think that other types of progress are necessary while many governments believes that economic growth is paramount, however, it is important to note that a growing economy helps reduce inflation while other growth aids revenue creation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50378787879 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9224070213 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8123539579 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204208219249 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651112509789 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784722762524 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127343493411 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731565412313 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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