Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument suggests that cow flu, has a very small possibility that a person infected with it, may die as a result of the inoculations. So the authorities have declared that there will be no routine checkups that will be administered to people, where the diesease is detected. The amount of negligence, with which the authority have handled the issue is frightening and alarming. There is no warranted justfication for their arguments and I would like to ask for some more evidences to evaluate their arguments.
There is no evidence to show what kind of effects does the cow flu have on its patients. Just because the death rate is very low, that does not mean, they should not administer vaccine periodically and timely. The disease may not incur a lot of deaths but it may have severe side-effects such as fever, cough, body pain. These side effects could be detrimental to health and prolonged illness like this could eventually lead to death. For example, a family who has contracted this flu may make the victims so ill, that they might not die but if it is not treated they could die in the coming months. These would be absolutely propostrous and a shame on the authorites for dealing with such a issue, so lightly.
There is no mention how dangerous the flu is to dfferent age groups. It could maybe be not fatal to kinds and adults from the age group of twenty to fifty but have an exacerbating effect on old people and people with history of other diseases. For example, the school going kids may be asymtomatic to the disease but an old citizen who already has diabetes and other ailments, might not survive the flu. This could lead to a lot of deaths and therefore requires more evidence from the authorities who are preventing routinely adinsteration of the disease.
Thirdly, there is the question of how communicable and widespread the nature of the disease is at the current moment. The cow flu could be having very death rate but if it spreads at an astonishing rate, it could lead to an unprecedented endemic or epidemic in a country. For example, the flu could be spread through touch on skin, then in no time, when one person gets infected, he will start spreading it inadvertently. This may cause many people to get infected and show symptoms. Although, it wont cause death, it could lead to days of agony for so many people in a city. This could also take its toll on the hospitals who might not be able to treat all the people in time, which could lead to a lot of horrible effects. So it is imperative to know whether a disease is communicable!
Therefore the lack of strong evidences has made the authorities take some really harsh decisions which could lead to a lot of deaths in the longer time. It is the need of the hour for the fficials to conduct a sytematic research on the whole situation and deal with the situation more efficaciously. skills efficiently.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2329 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.531 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.604 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.348 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.246 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.783 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.484 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 691, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on the authorites for dealing with such a issue, so lightly. There is no menti...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...w whether a disease is communicable! Therefore the lack of strong evidences has made t...
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Line 10, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with the situation more efficaciously. skills efficiently.
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Line 10, column 303, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Skills
...ith the situation more efficaciously. skills efficiently.
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Line 10, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re efficaciously. skills efficiently.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 514.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65953307393 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68770851178 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468871595331 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 749.7 705.55239521 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4175108854 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.863636364 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16520819745 0.218282227539 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510201109869 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048996941622 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951021717964 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567040112677 0.0628817314937 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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