The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line and bar chart illustrated an amount of electricity in a typical daily demand in the summer and winter of england and
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what types of activities english people used in for.
Overall, it is noticeable that the requirement of using electricity varies on several hours during the day, but people living in england increasingly use more electricity in from 9 to 12 and 21 to 24 in both seasons. Furthermore, they tend to use more electricity for heating rooms and water since it shared more than half compared to other activities.
As can be seen obviously, in winter, there was an uncertain change in the number of units of electricity. it went around about 35000 units to nearly 50000 units all day. english people used more electricity from 0 to 3 and 7 to 22 when there was a peak from 30000 to 50000 in using the electricity. In contrast, the electricity demands rose up to 20000 units at noon and dropped to almost 12000 in the early morning.
The pie chart shows that people tend to use electricity for heating in their households which was 52% of the total. The demands for kettles, ovens and washing machines consumes around 18% while other two purposes for lightning, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools were 15% each.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76126126126 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64659861217 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8938657511 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.444444444 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327115103338 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134012700219 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994278584703 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178759325817 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608580462461 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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