big salaries are much more important than job satisfaction
do you agree or disagree
.give opinions and exam example
Gone are the days when masses felt cheerful with less amenities.this notion has undergone see changes ever since the modernization took place. At present scenario messes adhere that high wages are more essential as compared to work satisfaction. I endorse with the given statement. This essay shall elucidate along with my slant in ensuing segments .
First and foremost,reason why masses are giving preference to high pay that, high price of goods and services. everyone want to fullfill their basic needs such as food, cloth, furniture Which are too much expensive.To be more precise, people need surplus amount of money to fulfill their basic amenity. Everyone want to send their child in reputed school, where as every school demand high fees.For example in Australia peoples are working four days in a week and they enjoy their life in weekend, they are happy with their earning.Due to low price of goods .they can easily and survive where as in India has high price of goods . It is difficult to survive with the low salaries. Hence high salaries are essential to survive in life.Secondly everyone wants luxurious life.For instance car, bike, good house which is not possible in low salaries.In this epoch mankind are becoming more materialistic.This is the reason people are giving respect only those people who are rich.Owing to this, people are more concerning on high wages .
However, job satisfaction might be necessary for human emotional development. It might be gave them relaxation and helpful to reduce their stress which produce in high earning services.Not only this,it is might be benefit to do work on working place and helpful to built family relation on working place but also it might be fruitful for their health also.Nevertheless satisfaction a is not only key of success.If the person want to grow then they need money which is significantly important for holistic development of human life.Money is not everything but without money is nothing.It is necessary to survive in life rather than satisfaction .
To recapitulation,I vehemently voch that although, in this epoch work satisfaction is essential which is always boost up the confidence of human yet surplus amount of salaries are also needful to fulfil their needs and develop their lifestyle of mankind.It is necessary for the holistic growth of mankind and nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20580474934 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91367200552 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.772180514 49.4020404114 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.416666667 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5833333333 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967257202719 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329731204021 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291883011333 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514251037669 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237829244644 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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