Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs suitable for women. To what do you agree or disagree
It is true that people still believe that men and women are born with different characteristic, so they always choose jobs, which is suitable gender of them. Personally, I completely disagree with opinion and we should create equal opportunities for men and women.
On the one hand, it is easily understood why some people distinguish that some jobs only belong to men or women. Following traditional view, almost of jobs have feature as physical strength, heavy, it is suitable for men. As soon as, parent orient their son with choice of career such as army, engineer or worker. Conversely, women tend to caring profession like nursing, care of children and elderly. Because men is often healthier than women
However, I think that we are living modern society, so we need to break with precedent to change thinking. Firstly, I suppose that out of date views prohibited development of human and society, men and women should have equal opportunities in all careers as long as they want. Secondly, now women have educational opportunities, so they gain qualification as men. Nowadays, I obverse many women making money more than their husband and they still look after their child good, even they are female entrepreneurs and contribute to society. Instead of, men only watching TV after finish working, they can help to their wife some housework such as clean, wash clothes.
In conclusion, I would argue that women and men can work mutual. It prevents sex discrimination at work and house. Moreover, justice in all career, it help to find talents who really passionate with jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'featured'.
Suggestion: featured
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03422053232 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75142285881 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.990070372 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341377790503 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112309078428 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965102475383 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202739595524 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11185733325 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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