Task-1:
Ques.: The map below shows a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 word.
The given two maps explicate the expansion of the bookstore from the year 2000 to present day. There have been various changes over the span of twenty years.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are so many changes; such as extension of sitting area and changes in book shelfs with increment in different genres, whereas decline in fictional genre. In addition, there is greater focus on the on sitting are with a café.
At first glance, it can be noticed that in the year 2000, the bookstore consisted of two big sections of fictional books along with a non-fictional books section, small shelfs of art, hobbies and cookery, whereas in front of it travel and new books section. As we enter in book store there is a services desk on the extreme right corner.
Further, taking a look at the present-day map, it is evident that one of the big fictional book section has been replaced by art, hobbies and cookery and small fictional section, whereas the another one section has been removed and made non-fictional. The central area of three book shelves is in use as sitting area now along with a café just beside it which used to be non-fictional books shelf. The other areas are on the same place.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-26 | Trần Ánh Vy | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-22 | hahoaan | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-21 | Trần Ánh Vy | 73 | view |
| 2024-11-20 | Giang Tran | 78 | view |
| 2024-11-16 | Trần Ánh Vy | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ont of it travel and new books section. As we enter in book store there is a servi...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a services'?
Suggestion: there are a services
...ooks section. As we enter in book store there is a services desk on the extreme right corner. Furt...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...n. As we enter in book store there is a services desk on the extreme right corner. Furt...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, whereas, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65887850467 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45362703247 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546728971963 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7287890306 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0514832904195 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222851923522 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324412340951 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373194848093 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265600732619 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.