Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words
More the satisfaction more the output will come in work,few people believe satisfaction is more important than job security whereas few believe that there cannot be job satisfaction always! Both the sides of the arguments present the rational ideas of the topics which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Satisfaction plays an important role in one’s job life however, I agree to the point that if there is more satisfaction in work rather than job security it means a person is doing a work of his own choice and he is not working forcefully just for money and job security, if a person gets job in which he is skilled rather than a job which is been given to him on permanent basis but he is not skilled in it, then a person should always go for a job in which he is skilled because more the knowledge, more the output, more the satisfaction.
On the contrary,few people believe that there cannot be job satisfaction always,Acc to my opinion there are various situations in a person’s life when a person is in wretched situation where he needs more money rather than a job , then here the point of satisfaction wont exist if a person has a large family and he wants to fulfill his family’s basic needs on regular basis he will keep aside the satisfaction point and will go for a job in which he has security that he will be kept there as a permanent member, which will help him in long run to fulfill his family needs.
There are various situations in the life span of a person and every person reacts according to the situation always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58362989324 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67007854767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430604982206 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.267856291 49.4020404114 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.0 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334643588369 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20999354452 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137277553447 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20999354452 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137277553447 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.35 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.