Hand-writing has become less formal, and it is done in a more relaxing way, now than in the past. What are the causes? There are more advantages or disadvantages?
It is obvious fact that, nowadays, hand-writing is becoming more informal. And it is more easy to write any letters in computer as compared to past. Owing to advancements in technology and convenient, people are preferring electronic or printed letters. This development has not only merits but also demerits on the society.
To embark on it, there are two main reasons behind hand-writing is become less attractive. Firstly, modern people are using emails or printed letters which affects the availability of hand-written letters.In other words, due to availability of electronic gadgets which provides more comfort and minimising our mistakes in writing. Thus, people have started use of these methods rather than writing by hand.Secondly, it is easier to read words if they are printed or typed in software.therefore, any officials conversations are either typed on computers or printed in paper.
On the one hand, benefits of this development. first of them, if we have long texts or letters to write in offices, then it is easier and fast for employees to type it on the computer. Consequently, workload of papers will be reduced in the offices. Moreover, typed documents offer the facility to solve any errors that is not possible by hand-written.
On the other hand, no can deny disadvantages of this development. First, hand-writing is our significant skill. It is crucial for a child or even elderly to write by hand as much as possible. Second, since people have used electronic documents for writing, children are losing grip on hand-writing. As a result, youth’s hand-writing have got very nasty as compared to their parents.
In conclusion, although this development has several benefits, drawbacks of its which should not be overlooked. we should find a way to maintain balance between use of hand-written documents and printed documents otherwise we might lose our hand-writing skill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29605263158 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18300733031 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9911609059 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218775019109 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746058373834 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672404740896 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125157821544 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05429921755 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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