Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that distance learning can completely replace in-class school for young children. Personally, I totally disagree with it because it can put children at risk of being exposed to harmful online content and losing their childhood.
First of all, not all content on the internet is suitable for young children. Today, anyone with a smartphone in hand can effortlessly share posts on the internet with almost no restriction. This autonomy in sharing content online has been flooding the internet with a plethora of unverified information that is potentially harmful to children to learn. Also, since children tend to be curious about everything, there is a high chance that children will click on adult content if they spend too much time online. Hence, studying online at home may not be the optimal option for young children.
Furthermore, children will lose a significant part of their childhood if they do not spend time in school with their classmates. School is not only a place to impart knowledge. Moreover, this is where children have their first friendships and learn the first lessons on how to live in harmony with others. The pure joys of playing together during the break time, skipping class to have ice creams, or having small squabbles in class will be unforgettable memories that cannot be taught if children only study at home. Therefore, since distance learning can deprive young children of having the best childhood and school memories, distance learning should not be a substitute for traditional education.
With all mentioned above, I strongly believe distance learning should not be a replacement for in-school education due to the questioning appropriateness of online information to young children and the risk of losing childhood. Children have the right to receive the best education, and I do not think that study solely online and at home will give this right to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13738019169 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7696935056 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511182108626 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1624234304 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261446736208 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100817287558 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337095894401 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180787022016 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230596698545 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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