Some people think that young people should follow older people’s examples while others think it is good for young people to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Conventional wisdom has it that it is incumbent on juveniles to take the elder as an exemplary models in life. However, people of oppositional stance hold it is justifiable for youngsters to challenge older people’s perspectives . This essay will present the rationale of these opinions before demonstrating my take on the matter
Those who champion the former notion may give their credence to the fact that “old is gold”.Indeed,it is irrefutable that the older invariably have more experience than the young on grounds of their undergoing a host of vicissitudes throughout their lives.By virtue of this, following the older can more or less insulate youngsters from such mistakes and therefore rid themselves of associated consequences. For example,it is essential to follow guideline of the seniors when taking care of infants in a bid to thwart any risks affecting children.
As to the latter viewpoint, the matter about validity of older people’s perspective can be taken into account. This line of reasoning is grounded on the fact that the world is constantly changing and evolving, which goes hand in hand with significant alteration in human lives. This, henceforth, can render the seniors’ mindset, which although could be valid in their times, wide off the marks in the ages of youngsters.For instance, in the past,it was considered important for women to get married in light of financial security. However, nowadays, women can live independently as they are given equal scopes to earn a livings just as their male counterparts. If the young keep treading the beaten track of the elder, women will be under the impression that they are not as competent as men and prone to such inferior complex.
In conclusion, these two viewpoints are all valid to some extent.In my opinion, I think that youngsters had better consider lessons imparted by the elder before guiding them on their path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22006472492 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00454910038 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62783171521 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.388430963 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.3 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190886479002 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07450558846 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994755941231 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113445059004 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617416654236 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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