Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter including:
What did you buy?
What the problem is?
Why you want a refund?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a regular buyer of your online shopping portal and I am writing to you regarding a defective product which I received a couple of days ago. Let me elaborate more on my situation.
On 16th July, I purchased a music player old songs called 'Caravan'. I had done the payment through my debit card and received the delivery
on the said date. However, when I opened the seal cover, I realized that the handle of the player is broken. In order to report this issue,
I contacted the customer care number displayed on the website. But the number is not reachable and there is no executive available to
address my concern.
Thus, the last resort is to write this letter directly in order to ask for a refund for the product purchased. Please take immediate action on my complaint and process the refund on my order immediately. Also, please make sure in future the salesperson is available to take customer
complaints on calls.
Hoping for a quick and positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Dimple Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84831460674 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63878144782 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5650554109 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15659326857 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044483847718 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726866815887 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499027797329 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624660857126 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.