In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers and magazines they will be able to read everything they want online without paying
It is argued that the expenditure of buying newspapers and magazines will be no longer relevant in future due to the free access to all news online . This essay agrees that all information which is provided by printed newspapers and magazines will be converted into online version. Firstly , online access provides saving both time and money expense while creating opportunity to search needed news easily.
Online newsletters and journals blogs has been already become the great source of time saving tool among citizens daily routine rather than weekly printed versions. Instead of waiting whole week in order to be aware of reports from newspaper or magazines it is better to surf the web by only clicking the needed questions to the app or sites where the latest and hottest news will be available after the authorization. For example, because of the pandemic almost all people as well as publishers are locked down at home and there is no chance to send newspapers and magazines paperback version on time to the customer ,as a consequences people are notified all fresh news only through the website and social media during the whole quarantine.
On the other hand, it is impossible publishing all stories and announcements which had happened during the week or in either way may create difficulties to the reader . Therefore, the competition among online platforms are growing non- stop at the same time creating a numerous opportunity for readers with the purpose of expanding the number of subscribers. Take for example, platforms namely Bussiness Insider , Quadro and Kun.uz or some educational apps which are charging for online subscription have found new ways such as free trials or posting free contents while earning profits through targeted advertising.
To conclude, the usage both printed versions of gazette and magazines will be replaced by internet sites owing to the convenience of direct access to all reports and the fastest acknowledgment of news after the endorsement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18944099379 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76438919872 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5748351975 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.1 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199246400141 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917187583506 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902996558617 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133828162262 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854869686783 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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