Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Globally it is being reported that young children do not keep abreast of developments that are of national and international importance.
This is either by the way of newspapers and the television.
Statistics from reputed organisations like the World Information forum and the United Nations for Children's development have revealed that this trend is declining alarmingly by 17% year or year.
In this essay I will present the chronic reasons for this decline and recommend ways to stem this tide.
After doing a survey of young teens in my locality, the feedback I have received is that the news events being discussed and how it is being presented and communicated is very difficult to understand. This is in both the print and television media.
For example, the government of the day decided to ban imports of Chinese products into the country.
The reasons given were economic in nature, that effected small and medium sized enterprises, impacted exports and a drop in foreign exchange reserves. Another situation these young minds described was too much of focus on religious differences, animosity between political parties.
In order to develop an interest and to improve the readership of newspapers and or to follow the news on TV, I am led to believe that the following should be considered for implementation. Government and private channels should have dedicated programs for young audiences to participate and debate on local and national topics. It should cover various subjects such as sport, politics, history, healthy living and community harmony. At schools and colleges, there should be projects given to students to discuss, comment and write essays on national and international events. Parents should also allocate some time a day to read and discuss topics of interest with their children. By taking these actions I am sure it will once again lead to young children to once again develop an interest in the news.
To conclude all is not lost, by taking a few logical initiatives we will stem the tide together we can do this. We all play a part either in government, media houses, educational institutions and as parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, animosity between political parties. In order to develop an interest and to i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, for example, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12784090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86382659677 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4235444476 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166281256389 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484019537995 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384225699554 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634702555496 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285147723182 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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