Some people say that it is impossible for the human workforce to complete with artificial intelligence in the future.
How true do you think that statement is?
Regarding the development of technology, Artificial Intelligence (AI) is one of the most predominant inventions of all time and beneficially affects human lives. However, whether AI will replace humans in workplace or not is a prevalent issue. From my perspective, I partially agree with this statement.
The first point to be mentioned is that AI's ability to work faster, more precisely and effectively results in human's unemployment. To be more specific, in many jobs requiring accuracy, flexibility in detailed operations and sustainable physical health, robots are considered to outweigh human workforce. Furthermore, work involving in complex logical calculations can be successfully completed by AI without any potential error. For instance, many manufacturers of Apple, Samsung and Microsoft have utilized AI for sophisticated tasks. What's more, productivity is what makes AI become far more dominant than human beings in workplace. Artificial Intelligence is capable of working all the time and simultaneously multi-tasks, which can avoid procrastination and operate the process smoothly.
On the other hand, it is not to say that Artificial Intelligence will be more superior than people. Creative-demanding jobs are what humans can do much better than robots do. As a case in point, work requiring creativity, abstract thinking can be only done by artists, inventors and engineers. Moreover, communication and negotiation are one of the most pivotal features in workplace, which are only acquired by human beings. All in all, creativity and negotiation skills are what make employees irreplaceable.
In conclusion, although AI will potentially gain dominance over workers in many fields, there are some jobs that demand human's gifts such as creativity, imagination and emotions that robots cannot accomplish. In the future, I believe that there will be a reciprocal relationship between humans and AI in other to develop life on Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62033898305 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35163909615 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.173483516 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161237425006 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542751917758 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332256672427 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100253304925 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298294901324 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.