Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer's responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Presently, with increased focus towards safeguarding the ecology, people are getting increasingly sensitive towards measures to improve upon the production of waste. Packaging is one of the biggest menaces which is a by-product of civilization in this modern world. People, unknowingly are consuming heavy packaged products. This increases the disposable waste and hence adversely affect the environment. Here, we would discuss on the two important aspects to curb this menace.
Supermarkets, I believe, is a major point of sale. The part they play to influence the consumer cannot be undermined. It is of paramount importance to understand that a reduction in packaging in a regular consumed item will have a butterfly effect. For example, making a small change like replacing the plastic covers over bread by paper bags. What goes in favour is that the packaging is required to give that extra degree of safety to the product which sometimes is a demand of the customer.
Contrary to the thought in the above paragraph, there is also a section of people who base their thoughts on the prominent point, demand generates supply. This goes without saying, that the supply would reduce if a section of the consumer would neglect a certain product because of the excess packaging. Eventually, this would become a vicious circle which would result in the end of product life cycle.
Finally, both the above thoughts need to cohesively work to support the already disturbed ecological imbalance. Nonetheless, I also firmly believe and stand by the statement "Be the change you want to see in the world". In this scenario, the onus definitely would lay on us to safeguard our environment.
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- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 73
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 78
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 73
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 78
- Some people say Supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging for products they sell Others believe that it is the consumer s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your o 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, nonetheless, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87721819998 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1654571277 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207729586929 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595267188268 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528112247302 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111157249791 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059364477627 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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