You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Mr. Sharma,
I am writing this to provide a feedback on your hotel services, which have been experienced last week by me and my team. First of all, i would like to give you a special thanks to personally handle this event and making it perfect for all of us.
Further, the ambiance and all the sitting arrangements were up to the mark, and refreshments served in the morning were amazing, and we really enjoyed special drinks offered during the first-half of the meeting. However, in spite of your personal surveillance, my team did not like the lunch served after the meeting. As per them, not only it was cold but also the taste of every dish, which was served, was pathetic. Many of them even did not have their lunch owing to this reason, so they left displeased with this hotel.
Although all the other services were admirable, i wanted to submit this feedback so you would take required action and ameliorate the quality of the food section. You can check with your chef and revise their recipes for few dishes, which were prepared for us and alert them for presenting such a cold meal to the guests, which were not suppose to happen in a reputed hotel.
Thank you for everything else and hope you would take necessary action on this feedback.
Yours sincerely.
Harpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t week by me and my team. First of all, i would like to give you a special thanks...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt and making it perfect for all of us. Further, the ambiance and all the sittin...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... all the other services were admirable, i wanted to submit this feedback so you w...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...cold meal to the guests, which were not suppose to happen in a reputed hotel. Thank ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, really, so, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7149122807 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39029454303 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.768180892 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.444444444 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305145973305 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110096284832 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043949609724 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178753012156 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437120019269 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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