Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packing on product they sell believe that it is the consumers responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this present era, human beings are used to with shopping through Super Stores and online sites. Some mankind ponder that, supermarkets and organisations have a priority of curtailing over usage of wraper for packing. Others, however, perceive that, it is the responsibility of perchasers to avert perchasing those items, which have redundant packaging upon it. I will discuss on both of these arguments before coming to my opinion.
On one hand, presently, there are numerous of companies, which are manufacturing various things which are backed by plastic, it is very harmful to the enviroment because it is considered as the waste and buyers burn or drop it in garbage, accordingly, the air pollution and soil pollution are inclined. So, it is better to diminish the usage of wrapping. Manufacturers have the power to change the policies in order to mitigate the issue. For an instance, one of the asian nations - Thailand, where all organisations historically opted the material for covering, which is harmless and reusable : paper bag and cloth bag as well.
On the other hand, individuals ought to stop buying those products, which have a lot of wrappers, if it has done by the humans, automatically, organisations supersede to use awful materials for packing. Another mean is that, by boycotting products, which assists to curb the problem of utilising redundant plastic. For an example, in the USA - United States of America, where locals were boycotting the usage of plastic for packing because where manufacturers were over using it in all items, according to that, they stopped to utilise of packaging in large scale.
In my opinion, organisations and customers both are responsible to reduce the covering method by changing the policies of company as well as avoiding to purchase over wrapped things.
To conclude, it is great for manufacturers to use paper bag or reusable packaging materials all the customers have to use cloth bag well go to the shopping and stop to buy those things, which have too much wrappers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ponders'.
Suggestion: ponders
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Line 9, column 202, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...top to buy those things, which have too much wrappers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12912912913 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93661786581 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2681561307 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208659829386 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712610377174 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048455738876 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119462569067 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298686231332 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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