In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is considered essential and preferred in few countries to have your own house as compared with renting the house. There are multiple reasons for this trend and the most usual reason is high rents. I personally believe that the trend of owning a house is compartively more beneficial.
Every trend has a reason or objective and same is the case here as well. Most common reason that encourages people to have their own house is high rents as compared to their income. Secondly, there are many opportunities available to own your house on easy installements. For example, in Australia, it is quite easy to have a loan from bank for your own house and it can be paid back in installments. Similarly, there are many organizations or coorporations offering building a house for you with a small initial amount and rest of the capital can be paid in installments. They do charge a service fee of additional charges for this service, however, this is very much worth it. After having these opportunities to avoid high rents, it is very obvious that masses will prefer to own the house instead of renting it.
Although, this situation of owning the house as a preference is usually positive but it can have limited negative impacts as well. For instance, if the owner of a house is required to relocate then it can be troublesome to sell the house and buy a new one at the new place. Renting the house is fast as compared to owning a house. However, in most of the conditions, it should be incouraged to have own house as this brings sense of security and safety in the residents.
Concluding the above discussion, I would say that owning a house in more popular than renting in some regions of the world. It is usually the case in the countries where buying opportunities are supported by installmet option. Overall, it brings positive impact on social well being of the people in that region and it should be facilitated and promoted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your own house and it can be paid back in installments. Similarly, there are ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69794721408 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76279020051 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478005865103 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3489135533 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2352941176 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278378002365 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092844664655 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428390453104 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176816107047 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289141122763 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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