You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter with regard to a problem with the computer keyboard that I ordered from your company two months ago. It is a latest hp model of QWERTY style, serial number AFX537.
The issue is with the space key, it is not working, therefore causing a very huge problem for me. I am a book writer and I have to use the keyboard for writing drafts, hence, the problem is hindering with my work.
In writing, spacing is very crucial to understand the document otherwise it’s completely unreadable, senseless collection of random letters. I have to deliver my drafts to the publishing company by the end of this month, but the improper functioning of the keyboard is causing a delay. I am unable to write anything, as it will be of no use without spaces between words.
Since, it has a warranty period of 6 months, the company should provide me with a new keyboard. Or it should send someone to my place to fix the issue as soon as possible. Immediate action is required in order for me to resume my work. Looking forward to hearing for you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Hank Miller
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...from your company two months ago. It is a latest hp model of QWERTY style, serial...
^
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of QWERTY style, serial number AFX537. The issue is with the space key, it is n...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... very crucial to understand the document otherwise it’s completely unreadable, se...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59798994975 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54578042152 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9827287017 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264572387981 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867890494611 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846691727472 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154304016776 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842822093635 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.