Nowadays nations are becoming more interesting and developing better thanks to the mixing of different nationalities and cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, in this contemporary era, the entire world is evolving into a place where importance is not given to any specific culture or tradition. Generations in such a country become biologically well-suited to face any challenges and living in more adverse conditions. Hence, I completely agree that in every country various religions coexist and will explain more in the following paragraphs.
To embark on, the diversity of a nation encourages creativity and richness of copious cultures. This results in innovations and new techniques in the mindset of people. For instance, a recent survey among top chefs revealed that the newness of their various multicuisine dishes is inspiration or motivation from their roots belonging to different nationalities. Additionally, due to the variety of cuisines, the year-end profit of culinary restaurants was increased two-fold. Hence, this proves that a diverse perspective leads to improvement in business.
Additionally, citizens from multi-ethnic societies together can foster tolerance and peaceful coexistence. Furthermore, members from racially and ethnically diverse environment are better prepared to deal with global trade. As an illustration, World Trade Organisation (WHO) has participation from India, USA, Russia, and so on who offer different perspectives during a global pandemic situation of Corona, which helps to combat this detrimental situation and come closer to the outcome or end result of a successful vaccine.
To conclude, living in a diversified multi-cultural surroundings can bolster the overall economy of the world and also aid in maintaining world peace. Apart from this, it also helps to overcome difficult global calamities and reach a level of tranquility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74131274131 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29788950583 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664092664093 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8852265011 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845343721434 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265330490697 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273841734962 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451855020601 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264907830083 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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