Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
As the global population is soaring at an unprecedented rate, nations around the globe trying hard to cope up with the increased food demand. This essay thinks that the apparent reason behind this phenomenon is increased birth-rate as compared to the mortality rate. Countries can share their expert farming knowledge and create a worldwide alliance to combat this issue.
Due to the advancements in the pharmaceutical sector, the average life expectancy of people has increased markedly compared to the previous decades. For instance, whereas in the 1940s a person was less likely to even go over the age of 60, nowadays, one can live up to approximately 75 years. Since people of the twenty-first century are living longer than any of the previous generations, the surge in food demand can be easily understood. Apart from this, the birth rate which is consistently improving throughout the globe exacerbates the dire food crisis humans are facing.
This upsurge in food demand might seem like an intractable problem; however, two potent strategies can alleviate the problem. First and foremost, nations who have expert knowledge of sustainable agriculture should disperse it to the less advanced countries in order to make them self-sufficient to combat increased food demand. In addition, an international alliance should be established where impoverished nations can seek aid from the opulent counterparts without much formalities to help feed their citizens. As an example, when Srilanka was confronted with famine during the 1990s, India provided various crops at reduced prices with tax abatements to help the less fortunate nation. If nations come together in this way, they can efficiently combat this issue.
In conclusion, a global population close to 8 billion and realising the fact that some nations are less fortunate than others, an international alliance should be established share best farming knowledge so that no one on this planet dies from famine.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-23 | ashkan zaheri | 95 | view |
- It is better to be a member of a group than to be a leader of a group Do you agree or disagree with the following statement 84
- All students ought to study art and music in school To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it 78
- You have recently visited a local school in your community It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities Write a letter to the principal of the school and say How would you be able to help When and why would you do 94
- All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d from the opulent counterparts without much formalities to help feed their citizens...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37620578778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94258425904 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6661735672 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211115625796 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780695487147 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399834295509 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124980366412 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050355967085 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.