Earthquake!
I went through an unforgettable experience when a magnitude 6.9 earthquake hit California. It happened over a weekend when my parents were working at our family’s restaurant. My older sister, my young brother, and I were home alone. Suddenly, our apartment started shaking. At first, none of us realized what was happening. Then my sister began to scream. “It’s an earthquake! Get under something!” I half rolled and half crawled across the room to get under the dining table. My brother was in his bedroom, so my sister yelled to him to get under desk. Meanwhile, my sister was on the floor of kitchen holding her arms over her head to protect herself from falling dishes. The earthquake continued for approximately a minute, but it seemed like a year to us. At least, the apartment stopped shaking. For a few seconds, we were too scared to move, but we quickly made sure that nobody was injured. Then we were on the cell phone calling our parents. We were thankful that like us, they were safe. Next, we checked the apartment and luckily, there was very little damage. Nothing was broken except for a few tea cups and dinner plates. Although nothing terrible actually happened to us, living through that earthquake was a scare experience that none of us will ever forget.
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| 2020-09-03 | Negintavakkoli | 56 | view |
- You have long been friend with someone If they do something that you don t like should you still be friends with him or her 60
- Earthquake 56
- Children rely too much on the technology like computers smart phones video games for fun and entertainment Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children s development 70
- Do you agree or disagree It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the statement All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study in 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, then, while, at least, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80090497738 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64937439811 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9820798746 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4117647059 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140027190817 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468964708554 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08657642156 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140027190817 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.