In some countries, owning a home rather that renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think is a positive or negative situation?
Some argue that several countries have consensus that the ownership of personal home is as more imperative as renting. There are many causes for this concern and I believe that it represents positive outcomes.
A temporary habitat, such as renting, is in a great demand, albeit it has some drawbacks. Citizens in some nations are thriving of having permanent houses which means that they are, without doubt, worried about losing their shelters in case of having no money for rent. Another reason for this could be the standard of living in my country is relatively higher in which owning private houses is the sign of luxury and therefore, the owner of the house may receive some credits from his friends and family. Finally, house owners can share their rooms with others for profitable and non-profitable purposes.
By having these benefits, people are less criticized and more honored by the public. Despite requiring lesser amount of money, rented home may cost a fortune for inhabitants in the long term. The majority of people definitely have positive attitude towards their private houses due to being valuable assets for the family which could be passed from one generation to another. In my country, one of the challenges faced by citizens is finding rented homes in the center of cities in reasonable prices. For this reason, people attempt to own houses in these places to survive.
In conclusion, the ownership of houses is important for being stable and less risky compared to living in the temporary houses. I believe that owner of houses would have better experiences and confident towards their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51544571436 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7255771135 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.307692308 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250357225511 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088497505255 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469373451478 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151495950185 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057863574038 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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