The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.
The chart represents four important reasons causing stress among Canadian in 4 various groups of age.
In general, people aged 65-74 and 75 and over experience stress because of their own health problems and no particular reason the most, while money and overwork are the main causes of stress among people who are 25-54 years old.
The proportion of people who are 75+ and 65-74 stressed due to no particular reason account for 35% and 32% respectively, which are nearly double the percentage of people aged 55-64 and 5 times as much as the figure of people aged 25-54. The proportion of 75+ and 65-74 year-old people who are suffering from their health issues constitute 23% and 15% respectively, higher than people in two younger age groups.
By contrast, it can be seen that the number of people aged 25-64 stressed because of overwork take up the highest percentage, at 25%, which are 10% higher than the 55-64 age group, meanwhile the range age 75+ are the least affected by overwork, only 1%. People who are 25-54 years old are also worried about money the most, with 15%, 2% higher than 55-64 age group, double 65-74 group, and 5 times as much as the figure of 75+ age group.
- Some people think that it is more effectively for students to study in a group while others believe it is better for them to study alone discuss both views and give your own opion 56
- Some people believe that for school childre their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than parents others argue that parents are not less important discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71770334928 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3226597445 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0424659801 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.333333333 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213358191694 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143772828241 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886198467383 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175990614548 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885451513963 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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