Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your opinions?
Hot potato in many years ago is the topic about age can go to universities. Some people think colleges are just for youngsters and the older one cannot accept this. From my point of view, knowledge is for everyone and we cannot stop anyone to find it.
From a unilateral perspective, universities are the best places for young students, who need a piece of knowledge to change to experience. In the university, students can learn with their intelligence and have the space to touch their dreams. And this is a big chance for older students, who cannot catch to modern life, especially the career about technology, informational, or programming. But it is not a problem for them because they have enough experience, which youngsters need more and more time to have, and they can change to bits of knowledge for their job. The fact that older students, who have experience in their major, can understand lessons faster than younger. It is not merely the speed at which the lessons are grasped, but also the application of knowledge to life. the student, who has the experience, good skill, and easy changing it to knowledge is the older, are students who have had access to live.
In my opinion, the aged man who can go to school at their age is brave. With many things in their life, it is worthwhile to be able to arrange the time and work to go to school and acquire new knowledge, especially universities. I cannot imagine how they can give up their job for learning.
In conclusion, knowledge is for everyone in every age, and I have a small admiration for those who are old but still provide books to school for whatever reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 786, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6678200692 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69728454663 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6645367792 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113451230856 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456978010052 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327690345732 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750961455698 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327607760721 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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