Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, fashion is defined as a trend that is dynamic, favored for frivolous rather than the practical reason. People associate value, social status and hence consciousness to being fashionable is gaining importance with the masses. In my opinion, fashion is essential in highlighting ones’ individuality but evaluating the true product value is important in limiting spends. This essay will discuss my view point with examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, clothing for current generation is not mere covering for protection, it is a necessity that dictates an individual’s social status. Most people perceive it as a tool for enhancing appearance, to gain the status symbol respect. Today, even for a leisure activity such as walking, people wear a Nike or Adidas even though a non-branded sportswear is functionally apt. This behavioral shift of wanting to wear to belong in the societal hierarchy is leading masses to misery, developing a generation of materialistic spendthrifts.
Secondly, the shelf life of clothes is short-lived, fashion is rapidly changing, becomes obsolete within a year. In addition, the brands factor all their expenses into the product price making it very expensive. Take for instant an unbranded leather jacket cost less than $60/- and a Fendi or Louis Vuitton would be priced at $5,000/-. Paying such exorbitant price for luxury products that are equally subjected to wear and tear with a rapid risk of obsoleteness is not justified. This is digging deeper into the consumers’ pockets, increasing pressure to earn more.
In conclusion, fashion is an inevitable movement in modern societies and people will continue their pursuit to be fashion savvy. I believe, it is important to look good, clothing is an essential fashion element, but individuals should have a balanced outlook. People should prioritize the needs over the wants, focus on wise spending rather than becoming a fashion slave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97397530015 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0567450001 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163544731532 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516494472356 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298869144273 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973884294604 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229623385216 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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