Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries.
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?
In the globalisation era, livelihood has become a severe problem. An enormous challenge is being faced by; especially adolescents are unemployment. The several obstacles are confronted in the path of searching a job after completing school and a degree.this easy will discuss youngsters encounter the reasons for unemployment and several other difficulties.
A myriad of reasons seems to be responsible for the lack of job opportunities. The students can not get in the professionalism world unless they obtain prior knowledge regarding the job. Hence, Without having utter experience, they have to work for small scale jobs and to stick on low wages and low mobility. in addition to it, schools do not provide education regarding practical skills which are the foundation to make sound career in the outer world. if a school conducts more competition among students, they can come out with their strengths and weakness. All in all, lack of knowledge and experience are the roots of unemployment which should be eradicated with the advancement of research and strategies.
Nevertheless, despite facing this problem, the adult is intimidated with other more difficulties. To sustain in the competitive world, everyone has to tackle social and environmental threats. For instance, COVID-19 has created a storm in everyone’s life.however, the situation is being revived, but still, tremendous people are facing unemployment problem due to pandemic. Moreover, political instability, natural disasters, social and racial discrimination, mass lynching are other rigorous problems which individual has to cope with them.
In conclusion, unemployment is the primary concern for school-leavers.in spite of combating with this issue, other social diseases like child marriage and discrimination on the base of caste and creed are harboured in one’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30345366585 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3223466347 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164642991239 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510383982458 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455728390418 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981285745869 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234250428246 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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