Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects. Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages?
Nowadays, every person definitely has their own mobile phone to do their daily activities. Modern technologies obviously bring a lot of advantages to human lives. However, it also certainly has negative effect. I support the idea that the benefits of mobile telephones are bigger than the drawback ones.
First of all, gadget can damage human eyes, especially after continuously viewing digital screens for hours. Surveys found that people should rest their eyes for at least half an hour after seeing the mobile phone for more than 150 minutes. In fact, people usually stay in front of their phone until their activities done, and it may take time for more than it should be. This instance shows that most people can not rest their eyes well. Even so, people can counter it easily by consuming meals that contain lots of vitamin A.
It might be true that technology brings out disadvantage to human lives. Nevertheless, technology are more preferable for a better outcomes. Firstly, artificial intelligence makes human daily activities become more practical and easier to do. Recent studies show that teenagers today mostly begin their own business in social media because they avoid of being intricate. For example, plenty of high school students start to sell clothes or shoes in instagram or facebook. In case there are someone wants to purchase the stuff, they merely go to courier and give the buyers adresses. So, they do not spend too much time and effort just to deliver the goods.
Secondly, mobile phones help people to be productive and continue their activities as even if something unpredicted situation occurs. As an example for this is the pandemic of corona virus makes most people choose to work from home instead of work at the office like normal. It has been proven by some experts that people are afraid to go out from home to prevent themselves infected by the viruses. Therefore, people choose to finish all of their activities from home.
Based on the analysis above, it seems to me that the negative effect of using mobile telephones are far less that the benefits. The issue of damaging human eyes can be easily countered, but the advantages of equipment to help human daily activities are irreplaceable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, even so, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01340482574 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51359606064 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587131367292 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7536759534 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14149493752 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459811875647 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544446449588 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099336023252 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771251050696 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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