Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now?
It is often assumed that mothers have an upper hand when it comes to the upbringing of youngsters. However, parents working around the clock call into question who should take responsibility for nurturing children. In my opinion, I firmly believe that both parents share equal importance in this task.
To begin with, a parental approach that takes precedence over other vital elements, including the condition of educational institutions and relationships, regularly has a great impact on children’s lives, and thus it is pivotal to require both mothers and fathers to take care of their offspring. Studies indicated that as mothers and fathers provide two different kinds of speech, a wider repertoire of kinds of speech can be experienced in youngsters’ later lives. Furthermore, parents’ presence can lead to the possession of a thorough insight into the parental approach and children’s own viewpoints. For instance, according to observation in a child’s daily operation, his parents can share their appreciations, hence raising the question of moral integrity and social norms performed by their son. As a result, they have a good grasp of the child’s inner personality and also how to educate him properly.
On the other hand, the lack of one’s concern can have an adverse bearing on youngsters’ behaviors and attitudes. In fact, there are a considerable number of cases in which adolescents turn to crime or even commit serious crimes due to the absence of mothers or fathers. Insufficient monitoring and no parental intervention, in an unexpected way, encourage children to break rules and exceed limits. Moreover, when conflicts do happen between mothers (or fathers) and offspring, the controversy may not end because there is no mediator.
In conclusion, I uphold the conviction that both parents’ concern and responsibility do lay the groundwork for youngsters’ lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unexpected way" with adverb for "unexpected"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...onitoring and no parental intervention, in an unexpected way, encourage children to break rules and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43434343434 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16252859902 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0608671367 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220211566383 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706864723645 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558143323983 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130686205986 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637803408069 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unexpected way" with adverb for "unexpected"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...onitoring and no parental intervention, in an unexpected way, encourage children to break rules and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43434343434 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16252859902 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0608671367 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220211566383 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706864723645 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558143323983 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130686205986 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637803408069 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.