In this technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please describe a new invention, and determine whether it will bring advantages or disadvantages.
Recently, the phenomenon of "in this technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing" and its corresponding impact has sparked a long-running dispute. Whereas many people are debating the proposition that the technological world might be remarkably fruitful, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a remarkable number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that sophisticated inventions can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the technological standpoint, the increase of new inventions such as the computer and the Internet can provide the society with profound effects, which might stem from the fact that faster communication techniques and computer networks are inextricably bound up. Regarding my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment that discovered the effects of computers and the Internet on human's life. Thus, invaluable ramifications of both using social networks and the virtual world distinctly can be observed.
Within the realm of climate science, without the slightest doubt, the number of new inventions, for example cars might exacerbate the already catastrophic consequences of climate change. Moreover, fundamental aspects of cares and vehicles can relate to the reality that the demerits of using fossil fuels can pertain to the lack of renewable energy. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that if the downsides of new inventions were correlated positively with preserving the environment, the local authorities would ultimately address greenhouse gas emissions. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the preconceived notion of the creativity of children.
To conclude, despite several compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea that the merits of new inventions in this technological world far outweigh its downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd its corresponding impact has sparked a long-running dispute. Whereas many people are debati...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ffects of computers and the Internet on humans life. Thus, invaluable ramifications of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76450511945 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32361881217 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4953007627 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.545454545 104.977214359 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290901270908 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095760791752 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913163068089 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175072814411 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808016097823 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 55.0591133005 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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