Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a
good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and
developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a
good job, while others think that is better to have experience and soft skills. In my
opinion, I believe that having a university education is essential for academic jobs
while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a job if they are
university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education
puts people one step ahead of others who do not, and this can be the deciding
factor of getting a good job. For example, without learning about anatomy causes
of sickness and understanding the human body in-depth at university, a doctor
would not be able to perform his or her duties at all. The competition to get into
universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this
level of education is for future work opportunities.
On the other hand, having work experience and soft skills, such as leadership and
other interpersonal skills can also throw the balance in favor of the applicant,
according to some. For many positions, there is an overwhelming number of
applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that
line of work or having acquired useful soft skills can be valuable to a company. A
good illustration of this is a study revealed that 40% of engineering graduates lack
the practical skills required for doing their jobs. For this reason, a university degree
might not help a jobseeker as much as an impressive resumé filled with various job
experiences and extra-curricular achievements.
In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in
experience or education depending on the type of work and field. People should
make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in
order to be sure of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04923076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91861035264 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.8714790975 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349237676928 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137585919624 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796757613797 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913407056574 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562847249942 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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