Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in so doing.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is universally accepted that, health is wealth and only with sound health people can work effectively and give high productivity in any working site. Additionally, some people argue that, it does not play vital role in working effectively. I agree on that, healthier staff work effectively and this essay supports my view point and discuss on both topic.
To begin with, in this modernization era, some employers knows that company productivity is highly effected by the employee health, so as a reward they provide different kind of subsides to their staff to make the employee satisfied and to reduce employee turnover. Thus, provided subsidies impact on work environment of company directly and indirectly. For intense, some staff can have keen interest in sports and some can be fitness freak, due to the imbalance time or financial crises they may be not involve in their interest, but if company provide them these kind of facilities as reward for their performance this may help to build respect and love towards the employer, as well as, this kind of refreshment is more effective than others package.
On other hand, some employer argues that, this type of reward is not necessary, but I completely disagree on this statement. An employee works his whole life in one company in limited salary and facilities, where he cannot live own life and interest due to the lack of time and money. Thus, by doing same kind of work whole day and night, make them monotonous and reduce their creativeness, while, it impact is directly can be shown on company productivity. So, by proving this types of reward as per their interest make them feel like home.
In conclusion, employer must provide different kind of reward and take care of their health of staffs, hence they work by putting their all effort and creativity towards the company
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-01-13 | Nareia | 89 | view |
| 2021-05-02 | samdilnura | view | |
| 2021-04-30 | samdilnura | 50 | view |
| 2021-04-30 | samdilnura | view | |
| 2021-03-04 | Kathleen_119 | 84 | view |
- THE ONLY WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC IN CITIES TODAY IS BY REDUCING THE NEED FOR PEOPLE TO TRAVEL FROM HOME FOR WORK EDUCATION OR SHOPPING 73
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Describe the skills a perso 67
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted Give some reason 84
- In the modern world the image photograph or film is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...r interest, but if company provide them these kind of facilities as reward for their perfo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
...nd reduce their creativeness, while, it impact is directly can be shown on company pro...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t and creativity towards the company
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96451612903 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.643398311 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551612903226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5051593693 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312369755593 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121390734996 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626686188966 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182781908042 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418733137963 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.