The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact with many people. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
economic development plays an pivotal role in countries growth. As today's world is divided in two fold, developed one and developing one, and at former nations the growth at its peek. Nowadays, a question has been raised by our social thinkers that now these nations have to work towards other important obligation instead of economic growth, such as social security and mental harmony. In this essay, I intend to elucidate the above mentioned phenomena and partially agree with the notion, that personal happiness is relavant with economic prosperity.
To begin with, Money does not bring happiness into the society. By fullfilling the just basic needs, it emerge a competetion in between neighbours and to earn more.In today's workaholic culture people are today chasing towards work and live a solely life, with no social intereaction. And this delve a growing prospects about to live people a happier life, instead of materialist life. And devloped government now has various schemes such as at workpalce limiting the number of hours or days , so that more quality time is being spend by the countries citizen with family. For instance, as per rencent news In Finaland, the government is planning to work for 4 work days, and 3 weekdays. To provide work satisfaction and mental peice. Secondly, by investing towards social security schemes, such as medical needs, education and forming community group, the govenement can bring social harmony. Thus, creating a happy country with happy citizens.
The aforementioned points has its own importance, on the contrary the antagonist, has raised their concern that economic activity are important and to move inline with our peer countries, otherwise the growth may be affected. However, instead of moving a pace with quantitaive approach, the phased qualitative approach has to be implemented, so that both prespects should be meant.
In conclusion, it can be reiterated that the citizens are an important assets of a country and by reaching certain levels at economic growth, the society and happy prosper needs to be fullfilled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26126126126 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7924615383 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9165549475 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163661463416 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536343335515 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284484496796 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09164271437 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377296867065 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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