Many people who drop out of school are more successful than those who complete their studies.
education plays a vital role in countries development, as our future growth depends upon them. During recent past, in our society a drop out at education institutes have been seen and those who leave, became achivers too in their life, as compared to those who are pursuing their regular studies. In this essay, I intend to elucidate the above mentioned phenomena and elaborate the sighted resasons and its importance.
To begin with, our conventional way is common in our school curriculum, the 50 years old method have been still followed by the institutes. As a result, the rote learning and other traditional way are still to be adopted, where only degree holders came out,with no practical knowledge and only they have the degree, and they are jobless. this causes the major sighted reason for the drop out. However, today's young generation want to pursue thier education is as per their interest, its not only education important now different recreational activity also inspired, as per the intrest of one, and at early age they can devote full energy and then sky is the limit. Furthermore, due to various job opportunity at sports level and non education sectors, which
atracted the focus of our generation.
To become successful in life at an early age the aim is to be set and then with holistic approach, with full enthusiasm and focused approach, the individual have to chase.
. As per the recent report, by the intiative of governemnt at sports, the increase number of competition increases and many more talented individual also caters to our country, who performed at international level and earn fame and name to the country, they are from the outskirts or small village. Thus, now the move towards only education is changing.
In conclusion it can be reiterated that it cannot be denied that if our old methods of rote learning has not been changed, than the number of candidates drop out increases, its the need of our to change and inculate changes to cater with today's need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, thus, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94082840237 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67736127852 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4096247246 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166190329304 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529804552518 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762723555272 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719283336518 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621602219118 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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