Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life, while others think that the money should be put into savings for future.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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time 7.55 to 8.47
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money plays an important role in today's society where an individual can earn their livelihood and live happy life. With changing times, the old traditional value of saving the money has been changed to modernistic approach, where people can prefer to spend more and this has raised a highly debatable issue into our society that which of the prospects has to be followed. In this essay, I intend to elucidate the above-mentioned phenomena and think that a abalanced approach is better option.
To begin with, those who think that enjoy the life,instead of saving the money it is better . these group of people think that gone are the days when people used to save the money and could live a strugling life. however, in current era due to workaholic culture where the life is becoming too hectic, and too make it stress free and relive tension, it is the need of the hour to make it stress free and live happily, by spending money on to the recreational activity. For instance, as published in a recent newspaper, a survey shows that 75% of younger generation people could not saved the money, due to materialistic culture such as by investing on fashionable things and electronic things. Secondly, the wide availability of option avaialable for leisure activities, as compared to older days, such as shopping mall and various online sites and the culture of credit card, which automatically attracts and invest more. So it is pertinent that today's generation spent more.
The aforementioned points have its own importance, on the contrary, the antagonist think that, people have tend to save more for securing the future, as no one knows what will happened. To exemplify, for medical emergency, education cost and retirement saving. Further, by saving it a sense of satisfaction is there. however these are now fulfilled by taking financial assistance.
In conclusion it can be reiterated that the onus is on to earner and their approach, however, nowadays in my opinion, a balanced approach is more frutiful, through which current and future is secured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01152737752 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7992084332 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57060518732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4694137157 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251792794952 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743860942898 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632222566076 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129094640954 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535147537197 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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