Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that a lot of money has been wasted to preserve the wild animals instead of spending on people. I strongly agree with this idea, given how that amount of money can solve many pressing problems facing humanity, and the money spent on wild animals is being used unwisely nowadays.
Firstly, as we all know, the world is dealing with one of the most hard-solving problem: Famine. Despite many efforts and resources, it seems not enough. This starvation issue has the worst effect on Africa. According to the New York Time report, every day, more than 100000 children die due to the lack of food and fresh water. This report illustrates that many lives would be saved if the money is used more wisely.
Secondly, the money spent on protecting wild animals has been wasted significantly. We can see a large number of preservation areas along the any countries. As an example, in Vietnam, each province has its own protected areas for wild species, but each area has just about few group of animals. I see no reason why we had to build that many infrastructures spread along the country. We can save a lot of money by gathering the animals into few large areas.
In conclusion, for the reason I mentioned above, I completely believe that more money should be used for humanity instead of animals as it is used to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s been wasted significantly. We can see a large number of preservation areas along the any countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67234042553 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52712222958 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8680679975 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273628207434 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925576221823 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962246594665 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167550904002 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843770721643 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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