Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Thesedays, range of choices keeps developing. Therefore, some people said that there are too many choices faced them. I personally am strongly agree with that statement due to two main reasons.
First of all, there are a range number of university around the world and the majority of its university also keeps improving. Every university wants to be the best, or at least be better than they used to. The most simple thing they can do is making more major so people would be interested to go to their university. As an illustration, business major has seperated into several sub major, such as business management, business marketing, business advertisement, business arts, et cetera. People, especially those who in their last year of senior high school has to face a large number of major choices and its submajor. They have to choose it wisely since it can affects their future.
Secondly, technology also be the one that changes people's life. Since Covid-19 pandemic, we have to wear our mask on our daily life. Some people decided to make and sell their own mask with the improvement of technology, which means there will be a large number of mask types. For example, in Indonesia there are a many types of masks, some of them is N95 mask, homemade mask, and scuba mask. Furthermore, people has too many choices of mask in front of them.
In conclusion, it is unarguably true that people nowadays have too many choices in every aspects of life. From my perspective, people have to be sure and confident enough in making decision since there are large number of choices waiting for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... year of senior high school has to face a large number of major choices and its submajor. They ha...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...y have to choose it wisely since it can affects their future. Secondly, technology...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...f technology, which means there will be a large number of mask types. For example, in Indonesia t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86131386861 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58106359579 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.63157834 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234836572351 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086289157056 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08130089446 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170635399946 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853303756687 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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