Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Being physically fit is certainly believed to be the paramount essential factor to attain victory in a sports game. However, some people turn their backs to this view point and think that mental toughness is way vital. Personally, I'm of the opinion that both of them are equally important and I will further elaborate each of these aspects.
It is easily understood why physical fitness is often referred to be the main element for success of all athletics performances. To elaborate, being fit allows sportspeople to carry out challenging actions or movements and maintain them in a match for a long time. Take football as an example, potential players are required to have a great stamina and brute strength to continually perform in a 90-minute game so that there will not need to be any substitution for the less competent standby ones. Another instance of strength demanding sports is weightlifting where an athlete needs to be adequately strong to lift their desired weights without dropping them which may consequently lead to self injuries.
Although being physically fit is undeniably vital for a sportsperson, having a strong will is also regarded as a game-changing factor in majority of sports matches. When a player is mentally fit, he or she can easily confront the pressure and hardships in intense training periods and competitions and eradicate them. Moreover, obstacles like injuries or continuous defeats are unable to talk them into giving up. Besides, will-power also helps sportspeople to calm and focused which enhances their abilities to perform in sport games. Chrisiano Ronaldo is known to be one of the top football player for his flexible movements and diligent reactions to his opponent's movements all thanks to him being calm and confident.
To sum up, both physical and mental fitness equally matters the quality of a sport game as well as the victory. Hence, I believe as a sports player, not only does one has to be physically strong but he also needs to be cognitively firm in order to perform well in his match.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tal toughness is way vital. Personally, Im of the opinion that both of them are eq...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...l as the victory. Hence, I believe as a sports player, not only does one has to be phy...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...e as a sports player, not only does one has to be physically strong but he also nee...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...e as a sports player, not only does one has to be physically strong but he also nee...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0293255132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84186768427 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589442815249 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4189946962 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218085660655 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751651950291 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490924475638 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143233837276 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707698858454 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tal toughness is way vital. Personally, Im of the opinion that both of them are eq...
^^
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...l as the victory. Hence, I believe as a sports player, not only does one has to be phy...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...e as a sports player, not only does one has to be physically strong but he also nee...
^^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...e as a sports player, not only does one has to be physically strong but he also nee...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0293255132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84186768427 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589442815249 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4189946962 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218085660655 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751651950291 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490924475638 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143233837276 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707698858454 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.