Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Being economically resilient with fresh atmosphere might not be possible agreed by few people; in contrast, few believe that this can be achieve. In my opinion, I agreed that nation growth may lead to environment unhealthy, but in order to surge economic growth without affecting atmosphere new laws can be introduce. This essay pertains both view with suitable examples.
On the one hand, when countries are focused about their growth, environment has suffered with many repercussions. In this era of globalization, each country is focusing to grab opportunity to sell their homemade product in other countries to raise economic growth. As a result, respective country may face several issues like noise, air, water pollution etc which will relinquish the fresh environment. For instance, Countries like china has increased their manufacturing facilities four times in last decades to increase their GDP but as a result china is counted as a most polluted country.
On the other hand, Economic growth might be escalate without having any ramifications on atmosphere. To achieve this goal authority may introduce new laws to control numerous activities which have repercussions on environment. For example, United States has resilient GDP among all the countries with lessen environmental issues because they have certain parameters for various industries in order to reduce their waste. Countries like Canada, Japan, Germany etc are also manifold various laws to rise in their GDP.
To conclude, I agree that this is difficult to ramp up economic growth with controlling adverse effect on environment. However, in contrast, To lessen these hazardous effects strict rules can be imposed by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is counted as a most polluted country. On the other hand, Economic growth might...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4641509434 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93374324245 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4027242623 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196170646996 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708605716833 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390558569705 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114695096458 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394754895618 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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