Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
It is quite evident that most of people who are working are not sparing time from their daily routine life for excercise, they are more inclined towards spending more time at workplace to maintain their position in this comeptitive world. Furthermore, in liesure time they are prefering to spend time to be seated at home in front of TV or laptop.
At first, it has been seen a substantial surge in diseases and health disorder in recent time due to lack of physical activity, many reports have clearly indicated that diseases like High blood pressure, cholestrol and heart problem have become common in relatively younger workforce like below fourty. Reason is very much clear and straight forward the relctlessness of professionals towards excercise, however, it is understandble that the current overtime and hectic work culture is responsible for it, as after spending tight work loaded hours in office no willing or stemina left for flexing musels in any folk.
Now the question is what can be done, we can not let this trend to be continue forever; I strongly believe that here government should intervein and labour department ougth to roll out some policies that are restricting employers to make employees work for more than eight hours a day and penalize them if they do so. In addition, their can be awareness programmes and campaign regarding managing the time and motivate people towards exercise as telling them benefits and advantages of regular workout. Employer can also encourgae their staff by making a gym and workout space available with in the office premises and let employees to use those places at recess time.
To conclude, It is very threathning trend of no excercise as it is yeilding varieous health troubles to work force of a nation. In order to cope it, there is a collective endeavour is required from both governmengt and employer to enforce and encourage towards a well balanced work life culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
It is quite evident that most of people who are working are not sparing time fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99380804954 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69376177497 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61919504644 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7696570717 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.222222222 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8888888889 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285048795862 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100767561286 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403849824569 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146955885042 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338296536069 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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