A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is extremely true that , nowadays people who possess top class position in society and have powers are getting more respects than that of the qualified people who have variety of attributes such kindness and truthfulness . I partly agree with this statement because of having present circumstantial issues.
Firstly of all, our contemporary world is becoming developed day by day and the inhabitants of it being so competitive for its influents. Everyone wants to show who is the best and who is the most richest among the societies. Finally, it becomes one kinds of trends which is being followed by the individuals. They perceive if you have no Social status and great position at their local communities, they have to lead their life through worthless ways. As a result, some people always try to display respect wealthy people to maintain their social status and judge people showing their status or material possession.For instance, the low enforcement committee of many countries often support the powerful individuals than a general victim. That's totally unfair.
One the other hands, by modernization , old fashioned values are being lost. Nevertheless the real human being always display their cultural values who is uprising in educational society. Although current circumstances are more difficult to received honor or respect from native areas , people in great place always priority old fashioned values. For instance, the dwell of urban areas are not touched the actual values of lifestyle because of modernization . On the other hand rural area's people far more better than city people in this case. So it depends on the mentality of people and circumstances of local communities.
To conclude, due to judgemental trends according to social status or possession and old fashioned values , I believe under no circumstances , people needs to get their respects according to his behavior. But present day , people give more values rich person than actual respected ones and it is undoubtedly wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32288401254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87329659276 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4578350552 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18732050016 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586147818775 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449708805809 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118759689886 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320694387707 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.